Ok,ok...it is based on a true story like x-factor series is. But the origin of the story is basically the idea for it.

Once again i highly welcome critics, suggestions or any other form of replies.

--- This Part happened this way and is 90%accurate (as I remember) ----

It is now about 5 years ago.

My Girlfriend Sandra told me she wanted to meet with her friends she knew from work at friday. They all did the same apprenticeship and it was 3 months to the final exams.

"Do you want to join me?", Sandra said.

"I don't know. I just know you and i don't want to be the only guy betwen 4 girls."

"Oh, all of them bring their boyfriends. We're going to visit a bar in (the next located big city)"

"Hm, alright. I don't have any other plans".

I wasn't totally convinced but i wanted to do sandra a favor.

Sandra and me were a couple for 2 years at this moment. Her 20 years and me 23. We had sort of starting problems but got to know each other better and better and evolved to a really good team and loving individuals.

Sandra had long, almost waist-length black, naturally wavy/curly hair since i knew her. Most of the time she used to wear it as a bun, which hid the great potential of her hair.

So did she when we went to the train station and rode to the bar. While the 20min-ride sandra told me:"none of the boys will come. I'm so sorry, the just texted me. I didn't knew."

"It's no Problem". It really wasn't. I didn't have any expectations when we left, i was just going to have a few beers and have as much fun as i could have.

We arrived. The other girls already waited at a bench outside the bar. Sandra introduced me to them. Mina and Joelle didnt impress me. Since i got sexually active i was total into long hair and i always looked at first at girls hair. And they didn't have any to offer.

But the third girl, Marisa, wor a big bun and i questioned myself what she hid it with it, just like sandra did. Besides her hair she was also, in my opinion, the most attractive of the three girls even though she was a bit "chubby".

However the evening was quite fun and i talked and laughed with all the girls and we were just talking about a lot of different things. It was already midnight when we left.

The next weekend i sat with a drink and sandra on the balcony and we were just talking. Out of nowhere she said:

"The other girls all think you're quite attractive"

I was surprised because of two things: One one hand, that the girls would talk about the boyfriend of one of them. On the other hand that sandra told me about it.

"Do they?" I liked the compliment, but i dont think of myself as really attractive or ugly.

"Yes, and i think you're the most attractive of our boyfriends too". She laughed.

I laughed "thank you".

"And who do you think is the prettiest of my friends?"

"You really want me to answer that?" I hated to say things about kind of this stuff, because I feared to make my girl angry.

"Yes, i'm just wondering"

So i answered honestly:"if i had to choose definitely Marisa. I don't think joelle or mina are attractive at all, to be honest.

"Okay. Not surprising me"

"Why not?"

"Yeah i know you love my hair. And marisa is the only one with long hair, thats why i thought you'd name her."

I just played it simple because i didn't want to reveal my fetish to sandra at that point.

"Yeah, thats a point but she also has the most pretty face, but none of the three can keep up with you." And this was the truth, even though i thought marisa was kind of interesting.

So a little time went by and Sandra and Marisa came more befriended and spent more time together, but always without me. Since i last saw marisa in march it was about 2 months.

I talked to sandra about our weekend plans as we usually did.

"On friday afternoon we'll visit my cousin for her birthday. Marisa will join us."

"Alright". Since i knew marisa was living near to sandras cousin it made sense to me.

"After that we'll go to a club with joelle and Mina. Would it bother you, when we're getting dressed up at our appartment?"

"No, it won't if i can watch football in peace". It was a welcome opportunity for me because my favourite team was playing.

"Alright, can we pick her up?"

"Sure".

On friday i drove with my car and sandra on the passenger seat to pick up marisa and theb visit her cousin. It was a quite warm day in may and both, sandra and marisa, wore functional outfits and their hair again up in compact bun.

We spent about 2 hours on the birthday, where it was really boring but i remember one thing:

Sandra left for a short talk with family members and marisa came next to me.

"I come to you, since you're the only one that i know"

"Sure, come". I never had problems with making new friends or something like that. Most of the people liked me for being kind and sometimes funny. We did a bit smalltalk, i don't know what we talked. But i do remember, that it didn't feel strange or something, just like having a talk with normal friend and i think marisa felt quite comfortable, too.

Then we drove home, where we sat on the balcony to have a drink and smoke cigarettes(since we all smoked back then), because they had enough time. It was quite fun and we laughed much. The girls discussed what they would wear later and then i could hear an interesting conversation:

"What will you make with your hair?", Sandra asked.

"I don't know. I might wear it open, but then I should get ready soon, when i want to straighten it." Marisa answered.

"How about you straightening my hair and i will do it for you?"

"Yeah it sounds good."

I later noticed in the friendship, that marisa was really fixed on sandra and would often to do as sandra told her. And sandra could be a little dominating.

Then they decided about their outfit and left so they could dress up and style for the evening.

I lit a cigarette and thought again about the conversation and coudn't help but getting a bit hard of the imagination(and also the fact that i was about to have great sex later with sandra, with her hair straightened, which she unfortunately did less than i wanted).

I stayed for another half an hour on the balcony and cleared my mind from all sexual things and then went to the couch and started to the tv.

I noticed the girls talking and giggling and was pleasured to see they left the bathroom door open.

They already were dressed up an marisa stood behind sandra with the flat iron in her hands. Marisa still had her bun but shortly after i looked she said "finish." And i saw sandra checking her hair followed by a warm "thanks".

I didn't see it that good but i knew how the awesome mane of my girlfriend looked like when it was straightened:

Black, incredibly thick, till her waist and all cut on the same length level with the lights dancing on it with every move.

I focused to the tv again, because i already began to get hard again and also to not look creepy in front of sandra.

But i couldn't resist to 'spy' a bit around the corner and switched my view from the tv to the bathroom door.

Marisa opened her bun. I watched her fighting with the hair tie and listened to the mix of giggling and painfuls "ouch"s, again followed by laughter of both.

Marisas wavy, but almost straight, brown hair fell over her back. I reached to mid of her back and would be straightened a bit shorter than sandras. The brown i would describe best with "hazelnut", as it got some, i think natural, lighter strains in it.

I couldn't help anymore and took a position on the couch which allowed me to watch the girls in the bathroom but also let me look like i focused on the tv.

Sandra started to straighten marisas hair. She tied the top layers of marisas hair together on her top, straightening strands for strands accurately. Once one layer was complete she got the next strands and repeated. I was already hard, watching the steam rising up and seeing marisas mane on her back getting bigger.

To the clearly sexually thoughts and my hard dick i just thought "I just will go to the toilett if they notice me", but they didnt. They were too focused on themselves and i had a perfect position. I already started to think of the jack off i will have, as soon as they left.

The whole straightening task took 25 minutes(which i know because of the time clok of the game i watched on the tv).

"Yes, I think that'll do it", sandra said.

"Yes, thank you". Marisa smiled.

They took some photos for social media together, in where their hair at least took a minor part of importancy in it, because they shook it in every possible position for different photos.

I didnt notice marisa wearing almost the same outfit as sandra as i was able to get my eyes of their hair.

Of course i inspected marisas a little more, since i might not be able to see it again so early.

It was perfectly straightened, a little thinner than sandras hair, but still thick. It was also cut on the same length level. And both of them wore it with middle parting and no bangs.

I went to the balcony to clear my mind and get rid off my boner, as…

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